I tend to not like single figures in a large background because here at dA they've become cliche, but I must admit that it works in this deviation because the figure is actually more engaged. Meaning, the violin (?) and bow adds meaning to her presense.

Overall it is a good deviation, but I see some problem areas. I agree with the other critic that the rain looks wonderful but she is not being affected by the rain. It's like she has an invisible bubble around her protecting her from the rain.

Also, I don't understand the glow around the top and right side of her hair and over the "music sheets" (?) that are beind her. Why is it there?

And though I like the violin and bow, the music sheets implies that she was playing on the rocks, or did she just drop them? I'm not sure and truthfully I don't think the music sheets were needed.

So I like the concept of this deviation and the basic technique, I'm just unsure about some of the details.

I must say, you've photoshopped the waves into the ocean very convincingly. I didn't even realize they were two separate waterscapes until I looked at the stock images used.

What I'm not too happy with is the rain. It's very obvious at a glance that it's a photoshop brush. But more importantly, it looks odd that the rain is hitting the girl's head and arm, and the dropped papers, so hard that it's producing a thick mist, yet the rest of her body, clothes, and the rocks don't get that treatment. I'd drastically reduce the mist there, since it really doesn't look natural.